What is your most favourite and enjoying thing you ever did? Well, for me I enjoyed playing the paino. Starting to play at 7 years old, time flew so fast that 7 years have past!! At the beginning when I just learnt it, I wasn't really interested as it was quite boring, since I did not know how to play any songs. But few years later, I began to enjoy the music that I played, appreciating all the notes that I produced, as I can start playing simple songs , thus I developed a liking to it.
I really enjoyed playing the piano as, I can play out the songs straight away, without taking a very long time to study the notes, so playing the piano is not a pressure for me, but it is actually a relaxation for me. Right now, I am taking my grade 8 examination this year, which is the last exam for me!! Thus I would practice when I have the time, to score well for my examination !!!Truly, Music Is Delight!!!
2 comments:
Thanks Jun Yew,
The delay in marking these is due to a change in the rubrics: they'll now be marked against the free writing rubrics used for narratives.
Anyway, your blog:
A straightforward account. No real technical erros that I can see, except 'alot' instaed of 'a lot'.
You might need to reflect more: you make some sensible comments about the fire drill and could develop this approach as, essentially, the purpose of any diary/journal/blog/personal recount is to process - think about - experiences and then articulate these insights, stretching and widening one's vocabulary in the process. You mention playing the paino, which is fine, but you might have wanted to write about another subject as you mention that already.
Otherwise a sound blog with sensitive observations.
Mark: 22/30
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